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I really liked this chapter!! Mae’s personality came through so clearly, especially with the whole “life has ended at fifteen” attitude She feels like an actual teenager instead of just ...

Okay wait, this actually pulled me in! The opening immediately gives that rushed, stressful feeling, and I really felt bad for Maelyn by the time they got to class. The ...

Hi! I’m really excited to review this one! I really liked how the poem begins with such a gloomy and almost lonely feeling, but slowly becomes brighter as the poem ...

This poem has such a dark and interesting metaphor. At first I thought you were literally talking about a guard dog, but the ending completely changed how I understood it. ...

Hi!! I really love this poem. I especially liked the line “my heart's copse revives in my bosom's cove” because the imagery feels so poetic and unusual. The whole piece ...

I really enjoyed reading this! The world of Eou is so creative and different, and I liked how you slowly showed us how it works through Jelly. The strange sky, ...

Hi! I really liked how honest and personal this felt. The line ‘In class, I may have people to talk to, but in lunch, I feel alone sometimes’ hit me ...

hello! I really enjoyed this chapter! There is so much going on here, but it never felt like the chapter was only trying to move the plot forward. It also ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem. The central idea of Doubt being portrayed as a lighthouse is such a clever metaphor, because doubt is usually treated as something negative, while ...

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This was a really interesting chapter to read, especially because it feels like the story is moving closer and closer toward something much bigger. Even though this is Part 6, ...

I really enjoyed reading this story! Even though the author mentioned that it was originally written in 8th grade and is considered a rough draft, I think there are a ...

I really enjoyed how different this piece feels from a traditional fantasy story. The idea that we are reading a modern historian’s translation of an ancient civilisation’s lost epic made ...

This was a really powerful and thought-provoking piece. I liked that it was written as a play in four scenes because it made the story feel almost like something I ...

This poem may be short, but it carries a lot of emotion. I really liked the mask as a symbol for hiding feelings, and the way it slowly starts to ...

I really enjoyed reading this. I liked how you used so many different images to describe change instead of simply saying that you became a different person. The stairs, dimmer, ...