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Re: Love is Logical
Hi,rikki for a review. This is a nice piece of poetry written. It is very light hearted and somewhat true considering the unfaithful nature of people nowadays. It could really ...
Jan 10, 2014 -
Re: A land not so far away
Hi , rikki here for a small review. This is not a very big poem so I read the entire poetry in a cool and relaxed manner. " The land ...
Jan 7, 2014 -
Re: Opposites Attract
Ok, rikki here for a review to your piece of composition. I really liked the opening lines as they seem to be so true. We may actually do it in ...
Jan 6, 2014 -
Re: You Can't Change the Beginning or Ending
Hi,rikki here for a short review to your short composition. The poetry piece is too small to comment much or find much flaws. It is more like a statement that ...
Jan 6, 2014 -
Re: Halcyon days
Hi,Rikki for a small and very brief review to a very small poetry. This is a three lines poem which is more like a statement. " balanced on tree tops ...
Jan 3, 2014 -
Re: Do we Know?
Hi rikki for a small review. I skimmed through your poetry. It is full of if-else conditions. I had to say I liked a few lines like these ones:- " ...
Dec 31, 2013 -
Re: Writing by Candle
Hi rikki here for a review. This piece of poetry is very very short. " Backlit by a candle he wrote his scribe Undoing the knotted roper lying inside " ...
Dec 31, 2013 -
Re: Fire
Hi rikki here for a short review of your poetry "FIRE" This poetry is short and sweet and very absorbing. You brought out a side of fire which was undiscovered ...
Dec 30, 2013 -
Re: Machine City Chapter 1 Part 3
Hi,Rikki here for a review. Initially I was very excited to see that the piece is titled as Machine City which caught my attention. I assumed it to be a ...
Dec 30, 2013 -
Re: a girl who may or may not be radioactive
Hi, rikki here for a small review. You seem to be a big fan of science and technology like me. Its indeed a good thing to think about science and ...
Dec 30, 2013 -
Re: Changed
Hi there ,Rikki for a review. The idea is bright and colorful but written in small sentences. It primarily deals with all sort and kind of transformations and alterations. The ...
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: Titanic: the Charlie Fitzgerald Kennedy Story
questions to kennedy...Mr.Kennedy ------ Are you 100% sure you were on Titanic? which day was it in DD-MM-YYYY hh(12hr)-mm-ss format? what is your real name? Are you claiming the movie ...
Nov 27, 2013 -
Re: Kismet.
hey,rikki here for a review The poetic piece looks like a nice composition though. It is about a fictitious character called 'KISSmet' Almost entire piece is good. Kismet is not ...
Nov 27, 2013 -
Re: My Fault
Ok here only for a review. Seems interesting but quite long. Quickly browsed through it. The plot seems interesting with some good lines. The composition seems free from major glitches ...
Nov 21, 2013 -
Re: Psychology of The damned
Ok here only for a review The poetry piece is quite long but at the same time,it is quite meaningful. The flow is good and opening few lines are also ...
Nov 21, 2013
