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rikkidas

  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Love is Logical

    Hi,rikki for a review. This is a nice piece of poetry written. It is very light hearted and somewhat true considering the unfaithful nature of people nowadays. It could really ...

    Jan 10, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: A land not so far away

    Hi , rikki here for a small review. This is not a very big poem so I read the entire poetry in a cool and relaxed manner. " The land ...

    Jan 7, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Opposites Attract

    Ok, rikki here for a review to your piece of composition. I really liked the opening lines as they seem to be so true. We may actually do it in ...

    Jan 6, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: You Can't Change the Beginning or Ending

    Hi,rikki here for a short review to your short composition. The poetry piece is too small to comment much or find much flaws. It is more like a statement that ...

    Jan 6, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Halcyon days

    Hi,Rikki for a small and very brief review to a very small poetry. This is a three lines poem which is more like a statement. " balanced on tree tops ...

    Jan 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Do we Know?

    Hi rikki for a small review. I skimmed through your poetry. It is full of if-else conditions. I had to say I liked a few lines like these ones:- " ...

    Dec 31, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Writing by Candle

    Hi rikki here for a review. This piece of poetry is very very short. " Backlit by a candle he wrote his scribe Undoing the knotted roper lying inside " ...

    Dec 31, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Fire

    Hi rikki here for a short review of your poetry "FIRE" This poetry is short and sweet and very absorbing. You brought out a side of fire which was undiscovered ...

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: Machine City Chapter 1 Part 3

    Hi,Rikki here for a review. Initially I was very excited to see that the piece is titled as Machine City which caught my attention. I assumed it to be a ...

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Science Re: a girl who may or may not be radioactive

    Hi, rikki here for a small review. You seem to be a big fan of science and technology like me. Its indeed a good thing to think about science and ...

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Changed

    Hi there ,Rikki for a review. The idea is bright and colorful but written in small sentences. It primarily deals with all sort and kind of transformations and alterations. The ...

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Historical Fiction Re: Titanic: the Charlie Fitzgerald Kennedy Story

    questions to kennedy...Mr.Kennedy ------ Are you 100% sure you were on Titanic? which day was it in DD-MM-YYYY hh(12hr)-mm-ss format? what is your real name? Are you claiming the movie ...

    Nov 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Kismet.

    hey,rikki here for a review The poetic piece looks like a nice composition though. It is about a fictitious character called 'KISSmet' Almost entire piece is good. Kismet is not ...

    Nov 27, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: My Fault

    Ok here only for a review. Seems interesting but quite long. Quickly browsed through it. The plot seems interesting with some good lines. The composition seems free from major glitches ...

    Nov 21, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: Psychology of The damned

    Ok here only for a review The poetry piece is quite long but at the same time,it is quite meaningful. The flow is good and opening few lines are also ...

    Nov 21, 2013


Monster is a relative term. To a canary, a cat is a monster. We're just used to being the cat.
— Henry Wu, "Jurassic World"