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  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Anorexia Nervosa

    Letter to the Little People: I am beginning to get things on track again. Hopefully, I will begin writing out my entire journey, piece by piece. And, hopefully, you all ...

    Jul 16, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Zel

    did you get this from the book Zel?

    Jan 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Glass Castle

    I thought it was pretty good for a beginner. It was easy to relate to and beautiful. Keep up the good work!

    Jan 2, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: If You Only Knew

    wow! This is absolutely brilliant! The only thing i advise is to go over it and reedit it with capitals in the correct places and puncuation Also, in the second ...

    Oct 16, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: With And Without

    You wrote out my life story! Seriously, this is just how i feel Why thankyou!

    Oct 15, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My heart is breaking apart

    Brilliant! This is just...well...indescribable! Keep writing!

    Oct 5, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sun and the Moon

    Just tellign everyone that it's edited and i don't have the points to repost right now but i will get to it!

    Sep 19, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Every Angel Has To Fall Prologue

    More, More, More!!!!! I want more!

    Sep 6, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Aching

    The think is true. It is so true. You added in the fact that no one can understand. It's true I am going through the worst tme missing my bf ...

    Aug 21, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: unnamed poem

    Brilliant! This was absolutley fabulous. I recomend calling it Worlds Apart

    Aug 21, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Girls Just Wanna Have Fun

    Wow. How can there be too much similies and metaphores? It's called DESCRIPTION!

    Aug 15, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Hidden hope

    I actually have the first few chapters typed up! its at the related topic thingy so um check it out! yipeee

    Aug 15, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: a dream for a dream-er

    Wow. One simple word; wow. I have never read a poem so intriguing and inspiring. That was beautiful. Probably one of the most beautiful poems i had ever read. If ...

    Aug 12, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Place

    hey it was a good poem and i made this mistake when i first started you are supposed to do two reviews before u post anything and then you are ...

    Aug 11, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Misery Lane

    suzanne, that was one rude coment

    Aug 11, 2008


When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself.
— LadyMysterio