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Thanks for your review!

Thanks for your review, Elsealion! I also adore commas, so useful! Have a great day.

Thanks for your review! The abrupt stop was intentional, although I see your point. When I write a poem I usually think about it being read aloud in my head ...

Thanks for your review!

Thank you for your review!

Thank you for the review! I agree that some of the rhymes seem forced, but that’s because I challenged myself to only have 6 syllables per line, so I had ...

Dang this is good. “I think I lost myself trying to find you” Absolute bars 💪

Aww thanks I%u2019m glad you liked it and it made your day better

Thank you for the compelling review! I%u2019m happy that you noticed the pacing of the story%u2014 I spent a really long time trying to get it right %uD83D%uDE02 Something I ...

I really appreciate the detailed review! About the sword%u2014 thanks for pointing that out, it was just an oversight, I must%u2019ve missed it. But now that I think about it, ...