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Oh my goodness that was so incredibly scary, i felt like i was there, i felt like i was her, i found no errors and this is a brilliant entry ...

Oh my God "save it and shock me" ?!?! Galerius you are so hard to please! i really enjoyed the poem, but i also think it needed some work and ...

I liked it, it showed your personality in just a few well chosen words and that was great. i sort of agree though that "this is me" was repeated too ...

wow that was.... amazing! your only thirteen (god i feel so old - im only two years older!) but i loved it all the way, i cant rhym to save ...

I loved it, momma a poppa sounded so sweet but emotional, i loved the beginning, it made me want to read more but i was kinda confused by the end... ...

This is very strange, though in a good way :D the style reminded me of the ninteen twenties and that time, a famouse poet wrote in a very similar way ...

I was happy when you held me When you kissed me When you said you loved me But then she came along I was forgotten Left on a corner in ...

That was so beautiful, its egsactly how i feel sometimes... so alone and just a pawn on a huge chessbourd. I found no mistakes, it was just so fresh and ...

I really liked it, though i kinda agreed with the person above - on the first line i thought it meant picking bubblegum out of your hair! lol :P He ...

This poem was so... true, lonelyness is just as you said, like sex, and it is a taboo (is that the right word?) topic and you dont just walk down ...

Myths lie. They are thieves and highwaymen that rob and steal knowledge and reasonability of men. I didnt really like this first bit, i dont think it set it off ...

I loved this poem, though it was a bit confusing at what it was about it was packed full of emotion and i liked that :D Yesterday I cried your ...

I liked this peom, but i think your description "bleh"s a bit offputting lol. It needs work with capitals and commas but i realy liked it! next its some where ...

I liked this poem, it was full of real emotion and pain, and i think that was what you were trying to do when you wrote it so well done! ...

Goodness and willing, all the way through. Your smiles and laughter and gracefulness too. I love this, a great way to start Those georgus qualities pull me through the day. ...