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Mea · 2015-04-24T00:48:06Z

Updated 8/20/17 I am taking requests again! So I figured it was about time I made one of these. Mea here for all your review requests! I'm willing to review pretty much anything. Things I will review: -Short stories -Poems -Chapters* -Scripts -Essays -Lyrics * I will review ANY novel chapters. That's right - you got that chapter 36 that's been sitting in the Green Room for three months? Bring it to me, I'll review it. Only caveat is you take the review as-is - I will not go back and read the rest of the novel, I just don't have time for that. I'll do my best with what I'm given in the chapter. You're welcome to provide a bit of a plot summary in the request if you want me to know what's going on. Also, the conditions below still apply. Note: I will only take requests for up to three chapters at a time. If you want me to read your whole story, PM me and we'll talk. Things I will not review: -Anything with an excessive amount of swearing or mature content (I don't mind violence, but I dislike sex scenes.) If you really want me to review something with that, post here anyway and I'll consider it and get back to you. -Anything with more than 4-5 good reviews on it. Guarantees: -It will be at least 1000 characters long, and usually significantly longer. Only exceptions would be if the piece is really, really short or if I think it's absolutely perfect. (A rare exception.) I tend to focus on the bigger picture rather than the nitpicks, unless I can't find anything else to comment on. -If there's something in particular you want me to comment on, tell me in your post and I'll make sure to include a section on that. -It will be done within three days of your request date. If for some reason I won't be able to make that, I'll let you know and get it done as soon as I can. Harshness I call it like I see it, but I won't be mean about it and I'll always offer suggestions on how to improve. I'm really just not very good at sugarcoating - I'll never try to tear anyone down. I'll tell you if I loved it, but if I hated it I'll still try to give an impartial review. If you want me to be more/less harsh, just mention it in the request. Just post a link to your work below!

Miraculor77

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Fri Dec 06, 2019 7:50 pm

Miraculor77 says... · Fri Dec 06, 2019 7:50 pm

I would really appreciate it if you could review my essay. I wrote it for a school assignment and am in a desperate need for feedback.

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Comparison between Fahrenheit 451's Society and Ours - an essay

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Starve

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Sat May 30, 2020 3:21 pm

Starve says... · Sat May 30, 2020 3:21 pm

Hi Mea !

I really like the reviews I've received from you, I was hoping you could review the second draft of this first villanelle I wrote — Last walk (2nd draft)

I don't need anything too detailed , just some main pointers for a next draft. I'm just trying to perfect the work since editing is my weak point.

Thanks!

kaitlyn

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Sun Jun 21, 2020 6:54 pm

kaitlyn says... · Sun Jun 21, 2020 6:54 pm

Hi @Mea,

Are you still accepting requests?

If you are could you take a look at this chapter of my novel: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 3

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Zeta

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Sun Feb 14, 2021 6:55 pm

Zeta says... · Sun Feb 14, 2021 6:55 pm

Hi Mea!
If you're accepting review requests, I'd be really grateful if you could review my short story Thought Patterns
Thank you for your time in advance.

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vannilawriter

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Wed Feb 24, 2021 4:12 am

vannilawriter says... · Wed Feb 24, 2021 4:12 am

Please review this short story/ flash fiction (depending on your definition of either one) a friend of mine has asked me to write this for her art exibit, and I really wanna iron it out for her.

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ForeverYoung299

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Thu Mar 04, 2021 2:19 pm

ForeverYoung299 says... · Thu Mar 04, 2021 2:19 pm

Pls review Cortez Shivick (Chapter 1)

canopy

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Fri Jul 10, 2026 4:19 pm

canopy says... · Fri Jul 10, 2026 4:19 pm

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