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NafaKitty
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Thu Dec 29, 2016 8:14 am
NafaKitty says... · Thu Dec 29, 2016 8:14 am
Here's the google docs link to it. Just a quit note, I have been working on editing it a bit here lately, but the going for that is slow since I've been needing unbiased opinions on it.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HEN ... sp=sharing
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Mon Apr 17, 2017 2:24 pm
Tenyo says... · Mon Apr 17, 2017 2:24 pm
Hi Nafa!

I've made notes on about a third so far, let me know if you've got any thoughts/questions.
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