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JesseWrites
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Thu Apr 23, 2020 5:52 pm
JesseWrites says... · Thu Apr 23, 2020 5:52 pm
Nope, too late.
Last edited by JesseWrites on Sat Jun 20, 2020 12:03 am, edited 4 times in total.
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Hanuli
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Mon Apr 27, 2020 3:38 am
Hanuli says... · Mon Apr 27, 2020 3:38 am
Hello! I would love to have the first chapter of my novel reviewed.

ennui - 01

Summary: the story of a man who forgot his name and his imaginary friend John.




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JesseWrites
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Mon Apr 27, 2020 3:41 am
JesseWrites says... · Mon Apr 27, 2020 3:41 am
I'm on it!
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LittleLee
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Tue Apr 28, 2020 1:26 pm
LittleLee says... · Tue Apr 28, 2020 1:26 pm
Could you review my fantasy novel? Here's a link to the Prologue:
New Prologue to my book

There's no need to review the prologue itself, it has plenty, but I need reviews for the following chapters!
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Fishr
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Fri May 01, 2020 5:23 am
Fishr says... · Fri May 01, 2020 5:23 am
Hello!

With all the wonderful feedback, these keep getting serious overhauls with editing. I need opinions please! And thank you! Mon Amour (Part I)
The sadness drains through me rather than skating over my skin. It travels through every cell to reach the ground. I filter it yet strangely enough, I keep what was pure and it is the dirt that leaves.




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JesseWrites
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Fri May 01, 2020 12:59 pm
JesseWrites says... · Fri May 01, 2020 12:59 pm
@LittleLee I'll get to it as soon as possible!
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LittleLee
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Fri May 01, 2020 2:16 pm
LittleLee says... · Fri May 01, 2020 2:16 pm
Thanks!
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DeliriumNervosa
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Tue May 05, 2020 10:08 pm
DeliriumNervosa says... · Tue May 05, 2020 10:08 pm
Hi Jesse,
I would love a review on my piece Path to Diagnosis Part One. It is about the struggle to get a medical diagnosis for a very rare condition.

Hopefully you get a chance to read it. There is a part two coming.

-Delirium




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canopy says... · Fri Jul 10, 2026 4:45 pm
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