A Dying Diction

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Warlock
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Wed Sep 26, 2007 4:03 pm
Warlock says... · Wed Sep 26, 2007 4:03 pm
I did like it, but I think when read the fact that it is one sentence made me open my mouth and go "Huh?" I had to read it a good 4 times :p

Nice imagery.

Your underestimating the power of pauses though :P Rework it i guess different style same subject.
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Evangelina
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Wed Sep 26, 2007 10:40 pm
Evangelina says... · Wed Sep 26, 2007 10:40 pm
Haha, will do, locky :D
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Owning our story can be hard but not nearly as difficult as spending our lives running from it. Embracing our vulnerabilities is risky but not nearly as dangerous as giving up on love and belonging and joy—the experiences that make us the most vulnerable. Only when we are brave enough to explore the darkness will we discover the infinite power of our light.
— Brené Brown