It's a great poem, but it just kind of stopped. You could really go in depth and really help us feel the anger; you know? After all, some of the better poems are angry and not cheerful at all... at least to me. (those are the ones that are easier for me to write.
A person is more than their experiences, stacked up like stones... Our best moments are the foundations we use to reach for the sky. — Yumi and the Nightmare Painter by Brandon Sanderson
