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This was a very intruiging piece but, I think it would help if you described more. What does her home look like, what do the main charaters look like? Where doesshe live? It will help capture the reaserand let them be apart of the story. Also, write about how the characters feel. This is a very well written story. I hope to read more.



I think the best thing about making it into the quote generator is when nobody tells you, so one day you're just scrolling and voila, some phenomenally inane thing that crawled out of your dying synapses and immediately regretted being born the second it made contact with the air has been archived for all time. Or worse, a remark of only average inanity. Never tell me when you've put me in the generator. Pride-tinged regret just doesn't taste the same without the spice of surprise.
— SirenCymbaline