Well, I don;t know what the story is going to be about, but it sounds interesting! I do like magic and i don;t concern about your future auditory! try to write everything from the child's point of view1 I would definitely love to read it! HIGH MARIA
Are you both sure that this is the place post this?
Kikaharu - This is suppose to be the storybook section, and if you want to start one, you'll want to outline a plot for the other people to follow and write what you should describe about their characters. You should also put a more decent description of your own character.
High Maria - This is not a story or a prologue written by this person. This is the storybook section, and if want to join this, post your character biography and join it.
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask." Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants." - Dragon Age
When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself. — LadyMysterio
