Just Because I'm Different.

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Just because im different.
You have to still care.
Just because im weird,
Doesn’t mean I cant bear,
The ridicule, and pain.
And not see the light again.

I guess your nieve
And you just cant see
The person inside, trying to break free.

I guess you don’t mind,
Its all good to me.
Just friggin walk away,
And leave me be.

For if you shun me or hate me
Screw me, or fake me.
I will never be.
Like you.
Beauty Lies Within The Beholder.

Maybe The Beholder Should Leave, And Let Me Feel Beautiful.




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good job! i appreciate your use of punctuation. i like how you expressed the feelings of different people everywhere. (i am also weird :) )the only thing i have to say is,
Just friggin' walk away
there should be an apostrophy here.
thats it.
O thin men of Haddam,/Why do you imagine golden birds?/Do you not see how the blackbird/Walks around the feet/Of the women about you?
-Wallace Stevens




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thank youuu!!! :]
Beauty Lies Within The Beholder.

Maybe The Beholder Should Leave, And Let Me Feel Beautiful.



The most important thing is to have fun! Stress makes for distress and neither of those belong in writing!
— Kaia