That doesn't sound too bad to me, but if we can, could we have Camilla's human parent be killed by this minion? I really don't care for Camilla, and it can put in an additional reason to her being gone from the race; say, Chiron took her out of the race to tell her the news. I don't know, maybe I'm trying to speculate too far, but that's maybe the best way we can try and bring the situation to a bit more attention of the camp, while at the same time getting rid of an unowned character that I personally want dead, but a relative would do.
"I'm fearless in my heart They will always see that in my eyes I am the passion, I am the warfare I will never stop Always constant, Accurate, Intense" "The Audience is Listening", by Steve Vai
I wonder if people felt the freedom in our culture to love louder, if they'd be quicker to say "I miss you" when the absence of someone is felt instead of just thinking it. — soundofmind