OMG!!!! I'm in love with it. I love the rhymes. I just love it. It's awesome. I'm in complete and utter awe. It's beautiful. Plus I read it while a really cool song was playing on my computer so that added to the effect. Lol! Great job. I congratulate you with the Awesomest Poem Award*.
*Awesomest Poem Award doesn't actually exist. ...Sadly. Cry, yes I know.
There is only one success: to be able to spend your life in your own way, and not to give others absurd maddening claims upon it. — Christopher Darlington Morley