This is really good, you say 'the dragon' a bit too much though, other than that I think that it's pretty well written
*i feel really dumb, this post is so short, i supose i should say more but i don't know what to say*
Very well; I hear; I admit, but I have a voice too, and for good or evil mine is the speech that cannot be silenced. — Joseph Conrad, Heart of Darkness