"The Game of Life"

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We place the table
Where we see fit
But only now,
Has the game begun.

I look up to your arrogance
And see confidence in what you do.
But, for you,
All hope will soon be lost.

I place my people,
My pawns,
Who look up to me in admiration
In the middle of the board.

“A worthy sacrifice”
I say as you take them.
I only smile,
For my plan is yet from over.

“You seem to have forgotten who you’re against?”
A friend you once loved
A friend you once held
You never thought they’d be the ones to betray you.

I take the master,
The ruler of all those beneath him.
The king.
You forgot.

Your arrogance has cost you many things
But as I move my king,
To call my victory upon this game,
Your eyes search mine?
I wonder what you intended to find?

But dear friend,
This battle is not over
I will not lose to
This game of life.




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Very emotional. Good job!
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This poem is very simple yet very intense. I dont' know how you did it, but you managed to create a poem of which I cannot describe in one word. The feeling you create is wonderful and you did a really really nice job with this. Well done and Keep writing!
"The only bad ideas are the ones never tried." - Puck, The Sisters Grimm




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This simple poem has great emotion behind it. I can almost feel the emotion in this poem. I really liked this. Good job!



You walk into this room at your own risk, because it leads to the future, not a future that will be but one that might be. This is not a new world, it is simply an extension of what began in the old one. It has patterned itself after every dictator who has ever planted the ripping imprint of a boot on the pages of history since the beginning of time. It has refinements, technological advances, and a more sophisticated approach to the destruction of human freedom. But like every one of the super states that preceded it, it has one iron rule: logic is an enemy and truth is a menace.
— Rod Serling