this script is really adventurous and i love the expression it emphasizes on the characters' feelings . i would love it if you would write more scripts and post them here and on my club page (which is Operation: Music by the way if you want to check it out).I was really impressed that it turned our better than i originally expected. keep up the good work!
No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it. — LCDR Geordi La Forge
THE pirates of Adventure1.doc
