How Not To Make a Human

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This was cool. I really liked this! Keep it up!
Don't send sheep to kill a wolf.




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very cool poem...it's rare that something like this flows, but it did. very well, i might add.

not quite sure what you were saying with it, though.

as for it being religious...i could say a lot of things, but i won't. this is about your poem.

and it was really good. keep writin', pal.
Am I a one eyed hunter of unicorns or a hunter of one eyed unicorns? The world may never know.



You'd better wise up, Pony... you get tough like me and you don't get hurt. You look out for yourself and nothing can touch you, man.
— Dallas Winston, The Outsiders