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Dregan's Path Chapter 2: Discovering Love

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Mistake to post this. Sorry.
Last edited by Dr. Who on Mon Mar 28, 2011 8:05 pm, edited 1 time in total.
She's my forever




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Oh, yeah sooooo believable. Do it with a guy you just met. *Right*.
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Actually, it's happened to me. And thanks for he sarcasm. I appreciate it.
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I dont find anything sarcastic or worth being sarcastic about. I think this is beautiful, graphic, but beautiful. Some people might cringe at reading this because of how it is, but to me its just. Amazing. You really did well. I think once or something you spelled a word wrong, like you said ad instead of and. But no worries. I'm counting on reading the rest of this.
"And when you're out there,
without care, yeah,
I was out of touch!
But it wasn't because I didn't know enough,
I just knew too much."



What a piece of work is a man! How noble in reason, how infinite in faculty, in form and moving how express and admirable, in action how like an angel, in apprehension how like a god -- the beauty of the world, the paragon of animals!
— William Shakespeare