I really like these pictures. My favorite part is the coloring.
The first one is nice, though the head seems a little small in comparison to the width of te rest of the body. And the second image missing a neckline ( unless that was intentional) lol?
Overall, I love the bold colorin and variety displayed in your art here. Really nice. Just smooth out the proportionality and it a few other minor tweeks- and it'll be perfect!
Too often we crave the extraordinary in life, without even learning how to cherish the ordinary first.
Friend, I promise you this: if you can learn to take joy in the simple mundane things in life, the extraordinary will take care of itself, it'll be on its way, hurrying towards you. But if you skip the first part, it'll ever evade you. — Arcticus