I really liked this poem! Its easy to relate to and sympathize with. There were no issues that I could find. Maybe just the flow in a few spots, though. Keep up the good work
I'd like to think I'm creative... instead of just plain weird ;D
I went to confront noisy neighbours, only to find the windows dark, stuck with two notes. The ghost, too, had "gone fishing". Something still whistled. — Liminality