Sculpture

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yoha_ahoy
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Sat Apr 08, 2006 10:23 pm
yoha_ahoy says... · Sat Apr 08, 2006 10:23 pm
Sculpture

Climbing to the top
Of a primary-colored abstract sculpture
Spinning around a beam
Like some high-strung monkey
Singing to the world
At the top of my lungs
Some crazy Broadway tunes
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Ohio Impromptu
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Sun Apr 09, 2006 3:54 am
Ohio Impromptu says... · Sun Apr 09, 2006 3:54 am
This was about a child on a playground, no? I liked this. It was simple yet vivid. The images were great, and I don't even feel like it needs to be extended like I normally do with pieces of this length.

Great work.
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xanthan gum
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Sun Apr 09, 2006 7:46 pm
xanthan gum says... · Sun Apr 09, 2006 7:46 pm
You seem to make this simplest moments so vivid and abstract and detailed - you can turn a flashing moment into a work of art. Please keep on.
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