This is a really good piece -- I can't complain in any way: No typos, no spelling mistakes... It is all so sad. I loved the mood, the way you made readers care about the characters, the style in which you wrote and everything! The end was an absolute knockout blow -- this is a fantastic piece of writing in every way. Great work!
"Not everything that counts can be counted, and not everything that can be counted counts" - Einstein
You'd better wise up, Pony... you get tough like me and you don't get hurt. You look out for yourself and nothing can touch you, man. — Dallas Winston, The Outsiders
