Waterfalls -Exam, need help-

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So I haven't posted on this site for some time, or even, written poetry for that matter... So this might turn out completely horrible. This poem is one for my Writer's Craft exam and it'd be great if you guys could help me out. Critiques, suggestions, comments are very appreaciated!
Thanks!

-Truth-


Rain drops,
Free-falling from the sky,
Soaring above the treetops,
Their dissolution so nigh

Merging with the flowing water.
Slip and slide in the riverbed.
Charging forward with all its ardor,
Getting ready for the drop ahead.

Plummeting down once more.
Answering gravity’s call
So graceful in the downpour.
Ringing, the roar of the waterfall.
.- <3 -.



Everything has to be taken on trust; truth is only that which is taken to be true. It's the currency of living. There may be nothing behind it, but it doesn't make any difference so long as it is honoured. One acts on assumptions. What do you assume?
— Player (Rosencrantz & Guildenstern Are Dead by Tom Stoppard)