Lol. It was fine. You seemed a little too worried about pronunciation though. Accents are all about the sound. After you have that down, then you focus on a particular dialect.
I'm never what I like I'm double sided And I just can't hide I kind of like it When I make you cry 'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up Inside
And on the pedestal these words appear:/'My name is Ozymandias, king of kings;/Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!'/Nothing beside remains. — Percy Bysshe Shelley