I'll bite I'm looking for opinions on "Ch1: The Nomad Boy (p1)" filed under "Resonance of Misko." So far I've gotten some good pieces of advice and a lot of praise but I'm really looking for someone who can pinpoint flaws and beat it to a pulp, heheh. Any thoughts on it would be amazing
Here's a direct link so you don't have to sift through my portfolio: work.php?id=100435
Impossible is a big word thrown around by small men who find it easier to live in the world they've been given than to explore the power they have to change it.
CandidDreamer wrote:http://www.writerfeed.com/work.php?id=100496 This is the first chapter of my book Risk. This is the un edited version. Please check it out and leave a review.
Daddy Long Legs are more closely related to crabs than spiders and somehow the idea of crablike creatures with spider legs that have escaped the entrappings of the primordial sea and now crawl over land and can walk up and down walls and ceilings creeps me more than I can adequately describe. — Snoink