I mean, I'm not awesome, but I can edit if you'd like! I reviewed something of your's yesterday, was the stuff I pointed out the kind of thing you're looking for?
Don't we all? My mom has offered to do mine. She is an English geek, and I am decidedly opposite of that. My grammar is terrible. I followed a diy book binding guide and put my story in book format, which really helps it circulate and get edited.
I lingered round them, under that benign sky: watched the moths fluttering among the heath and harebells, listened to the soft wind breathing through the grass, and wondered how any one could ever imagine unquiet slumbers for the sleepers in that quiet earth. — Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights
My mom has offered to do mine. She is an English geek, and I am decidedly opposite of that. My grammar is terrible.
Just let me know. 
