I dont find anything sarcastic or worth being sarcastic about. I think this is beautiful, graphic, but beautiful. Some people might cringe at reading this because of how it is, but to me its just. Amazing. You really did well. I think once or something you spelled a word wrong, like you said ad instead of and. But no worries. I'm counting on reading the rest of this.
"And when you're out there, without care, yeah, I was out of touch! But it wasn't because I didn't know enough, I just knew too much."
If you don't know it's impossible it's easier to do. And because nobody's done it before, they haven't made up rules to stop anyone doing that again, yet. — Neil Gaiman
