Sinking in an hourglass

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Last edited by SnowGhost on Thu Aug 27, 2020 2:40 am, edited 1 time in total.
Just killing time until time kills me.




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Just killing time until time kills me.




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Last edited by SnowGhost on Thu Aug 27, 2020 2:40 am, edited 1 time in total.
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I like your poems better the less they rhyme, but i think you have a great way of picking out symbols and topics.




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Last edited by SnowGhost on Mon Oct 22, 2018 1:34 am, edited 1 time in total.
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I'M SINKING GUYS. I'M SINKING.
Just killing time until time kills me.




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*throws snowmonkey a life-vest* :)

I'm enjoying the variety in your poems snowmonkey - you are a clever rhymer and great at creating good flow especially in your rhyming pieces. I think 9 is my favorite so far - it's simple language, but comes across so genuinely!
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return




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You're not sinking, you've got this!

I think #8 is my favourite of yours so far - the last line brings across so much with really very few words.
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