Lol. It was fine. You seemed a little too worried about pronunciation though. Accents are all about the sound. After you have that down, then you focus on a particular dialect.
I'm never what I like I'm double sided And I just can't hide I kind of like it When I make you cry 'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up Inside
You'd better wise up, Pony... you get tough like me and you don't get hurt. You look out for yourself and nothing can touch you, man. — Dallas Winston, The Outsiders
