Lol. It was fine. You seemed a little too worried about pronunciation though. Accents are all about the sound. After you have that down, then you focus on a particular dialect.
I'm never what I like I'm double sided And I just can't hide I kind of like it When I make you cry 'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up Inside
You own everything that happened to you. Tell your stories. If people wanted you to write warmly about them, they should have behaved better. — Anne Lamott
