Published May 3, 2006
THE SONG I"M ABOUT TO WRITE IS OFF THE TOP OF MY HEAD> HOPE YOU LIKE IT:
Something sings to me
sings inside my dreams
no one can hear me
no one knows I"m here
but you
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You see right into my soul
you see me right through my fears
you see everything I hold
including all my tears
i bow down upon your presence
scream out my confessions
you come down to my knees
you lift me up on my feet
and for this I thank you father
for this I thank you brother
for this I thank you my friend
your there for me
till the end
As the nights get colder
i get smaller
fading away in the crowd
you stay by me
your my friend
beside me
CHORUS:
You see right into my soul
you see me right through my fears
you see everything I hold
including all my tears
i bow down upon your presence
scream out my confessions
you come down to my knees
you lift me up on my feet
and for this I thank you father
for this I thank you brother
for this I thank you my friend
your there for me
till the end
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This is sweet. I have a weak spot for friendship poems. It needs a little work (expand, more description, etc.), but it's still pretty good. Keep writing.
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