Published December 20, 2007
I miss you
Please come home
I miss you
Why did you leave me all alone
I miss you
Why did you have to say goodbye
I miss you
Please tell me why
I miss you
You are the one I love
I miss you
All I want is just a little hug
I miss you....
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My first suggestion... really go into depth here. Why do you miss the person so much? Do you feel guilt, confusion, apprehension? We need to know what you feel.
We know nothing of the situation, so this piece sounds a bit like 'poor me' writing.
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