by Denia

Published October 24, 2012

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Taxi
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Taxi commented Comment · Feb 9, 2013

Hey Denia!

Excellent poem, but I'd like to correct your spelling on this part:

Denia wrote:


Other than that, it's flawless!

Keep on writing! I'll see ya around!

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Caesar
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Caesar commented Comment · Feb 9, 2013

How very dramatic.

Yes, the images presented in this poem are absolutely splendid. My favourite part:


Caesar replied · Feb 9, 2013

Truly a masterpiece.



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