I Am You; Dedicated to both of them...

by ElrRay

Published March 1, 2012

In Poetry

Comments & reviews · 2
fallenfromthesky18 wrote a review Review · Mar 2, 2012

"I can be you in a new body,
Which can be you but still nobody..."

Favorite part. I had to read it twice because it flowed so well. Actually, this whole poem flows really well. The only thing that was off for me was the last line.

ElrRay replied · Mar 2, 2012

oh, thanx! :)

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GrymmRipper commented Comment · Mar 1, 2012

Loved it! :D

ElrRay replied · Mar 1, 2012

thanks :)



You got rid of them. Yes, that's just like you. Getting rid of everything unpleasant instead of learning to put up with it.
— Aldous Huxley, Brave New World