Published April 1, 2007
Lost dreams, forgotten dreams.
Songs unheard,
Tales untold.
All go to the dream king.
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hmm..
Pretty good.
It was small and simple though.
Didn't really have much meaning.
But maybe that was the point, or if not, maybe it has a meaning to you.
If not, then simple poems are always fun.
Keep writing!
-Brooke