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I agree with Mesh. Exactly what she said.
Beautiful.
It's both. The last stanza I can almost hear as a song ending.
This is beautifully written, i think.
I have nothing to say. It's a beautiful poem. Uh...I guess it could use some punctuation but it works without it and yeah I think it's poetry as well.
I'm not breaking a law or anything commenting on this am I? anyway I thought this was more of a poem, but I guess you could turn it into lyrics, just by re-doing the format. This is a really sad, and beutiful poem.
"how many times do i have to fall
before she realises i'm too heavy
to be caught
how many times do i have to die
before she knows harsh words
and serpent tongues just don't hurt anymore
how many times do i have to cry
before she fucking realises i hate her so"
I really like this stanza starts the poem off very well.
I think this is poetry, but wow, another sad poem, *cough cough* I wonder why you wrote this? Anyway, it's great, he he, I like it.