Published July 7, 2010
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*Main Character*
-Name- Casey Svendsen-Onyx Johnson
-Age- 18-21 (Range of his age during the novel)
-Personality- Strong-willed, but quiet. Disciplined and cautious. Like able and easy to be around. Relaxed and kind. Has no tolerance for bullies and people who intimidate other people.
-Skills- When injustice has occurred, Casey feels that he has to take the matter into his own hands, which usually results in a fight. Has a weakness when his past is brought up.
-History- Not much is known about Casey other than: His dad was abusive towards him, however his mother was kind and loving.
-Likes- Strong-Willed people like him.
-Dislikes- People who give up.
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Looking for Love- Yes
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I don't really know if I can review this, though I'll place my opinion on your character to make it strong and stuff. I've seen these kind of things in the Story Book thread so I kind of know a good character and how to understand it. I'm Cirque by the way.
-Name: Interesting though frank. I find both names very strong and somewhat easy to say, I think that they both do brilliantly. Just to warn you, the names I often fit the last. Though these do, if you do create another character make sure its not just to names slopped together.
-Age: To be helpful, I'll tell you now; That's a very wild up leap for names. A year old can be tolerated though that wide means you'd have to have a rather lot of books.
The rest of the tabs are kind of choppy. They're like throw around sentences then really a personality. Many poeple have quite a lot of quirks whilst your characters isn't that big. This is a great link that'll help you with the perfection of your profile. Character Profile Link
I'm sorry this is small but I don't know what else I can say.