Published January 3, 2008
Sharpen your swords on
the grey rocks of pride.
Those tongues of yours even go
to scraping the hot asphalt.
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i agree very much so with that point of veiw. They way that you conveyed your message was very well.
GoooD Job!
I'll try working on a stretched version.
This was very short and got the message across. I do think that you could make it longer.
I agree with the message, but it was kind of short. I liked the part about sharpening swords on rocks of pride.