Bright white lights
Flash
Across the sky
Planets orbit
Earth spins
Crickets chirp
I fall
The grass stains
I laugh
I stand and walk
Into the woods
Trees tower over
I feel peace
I feel at home
In West Virginia
Ive never felt
This way
Anywhere else
Not Kansas
Or Cal
Just here
In the serene
Green
The redwood
And birds
Quiet
Best view
Best life
I find it easier to
Breathe
To exist
I see clearly
Better than
In the city
I feel as though
Ive lived here
Forever
Not a week
I appreciate
The forests
And fish
And clouds
The bird's music
The life of a
West Virginian
The bubbling creek
And rustling leaves
Give me meaning
A purpose
A breath out here
Is not just yours
Nor a single being’s
But everything’s
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