Thanks to all my reviewers! This is currently being rewritten.
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Hey Lauren...Still waiting for the next chapter........
Lauren, I really really enjoyed this. I did notice a few mistakes, but it's simply like you fought with the space bar and lost . .. Just reread it and you'll see
I can't wait to see where you are going with this and what your plans are for Natura...Please PM me for the next?
Tanya
Hah. Wow. If anyone notices the Miss NEED A NAME. Well. That's because I need to give her alias a name. I just haven't yet. So ignore it. I'm going to try and fix that shortly.