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Wow i actually loved this :')
You're really good. How old are you?
Your grammar is almost perfect. Apart from missing a couple of comma's out
Like.
Gone, off into the sky (,) never to return.
The bell rang(,) just as Anna shut the door.
Overall i really like it.
Keep on writing!
I'll read the rest of your work and keep an eye out for your work :')