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This night baby, it's been so hard
Tryna keep myself from breaking u-u-p
(Radio static)
My mind, it goes ra-ta-ta-ta-ta
(Gun noises)
When I think of us at the altar
Can't wait to see you at the altar
Where the hell were you at the altar?
Might as well have tore me in half
Did you get cold feet, mmm baby?
Did you not know what to think, mmm baby?
Where the hell were you at the altar?
From he-re our bond feels so far
Why were you so hesitant, mmm baby?
Lemme put this in the present tense, mm baby
Where are you right now at the altar?
You should be falling into my arms
But now I feel, oh god, so locked up
Oh please don't tell me that I fucked up
Where the hell were you at the altar?
Might as well have tore me in half
Did you get cold feet, mmm baby?
Did you not know what to think, mmm baby?
Where the hell were you at the altar?
From he-re our bond feels so far
Why were you so hesitant, mmm baby?
Lemme put this in the present tense, mm baby
WHY THE FUCK AREN'T YOU AT THE ALTAR
WHY ARE YOU TEARING ME IN HALF
YOU'VE GOT COLD FEET, MAYBE?
WHAT DO YOU THINK, BABY?
Where the hell were you at the altar?
Might as well have tore me in half
Did you get cold feet, mmm baby?
Did you not know what to think, mmm baby?
Where the hell were you at the altar?
From he-re our bond feels so far
Why were you so hesitant, mmm baby?
Lemme put this in the present tense, mm baby
Please walk with me to the altar
Can you still find it in your heart?
I miss you so much, baby
I need your touch, baby
(Indistinct talking betwee
n me and her)
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Woah this was really good, I loved the like alliteration and description! It reminds me of the song "Where is my husband" but like gone wrong! Keep up the good work my friend.