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Love spells and my girl (chapter one)✨🥹🤞🏼

by Princesskitty

Published November 5, 2026

16+ Language

In Love spells and my girl

Warning: This work has been rated 16+ for language.

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love spells and my girl

Chapter one

Our little family back together again.

It was 5 o’clock on a Sunday morning and I was going for a walk across the beach. The sunrise was beautiful it reminded of her. God she’s so beautiful I think to my self as I continue walking across the sand as the waves softly brush against my ankles. I miss

her I can’t believe her parents sent her to a boarding school I miss her beautiful brown eyes that sparkle in the sun light, her adorable smile and her soft blonde hair that always looks amazing. I sat down in the sand to watch the sunrise, I began to daydream about her then I suddenly heard someone yelling my name “PRIMROSE” I turned around to see who it was and to my surprise it was her “ASHLEY” I yelled back as i run to her i watched her beautiful blonde hair sway in the morning breeze as she kept running towards me. “Your back I missed you so much baby”I said as I hugged her tightly “ I missed you too baby” she replied. “how long are you home for” I ask as we slowly move out of the hug “a week” she replied in a sad soft tone “oh only a week ok who will you be staying with during your week home” “i was hoping I could stay with you only if that’s ok with you of course” she said as she smiled nervously. “ ah of course you can stay with me baby” i lean in and kiss her on her soft pink lips.That kiss felt like heaven i missed her so bad and now she was back but only for a week. We had limited time but we were going to make every minute count. She put her arm around me and we walked back to the car to head to my apartment where my dashund jasper was so happy to see Ashley again. As soon as he heard that door lock click he ran to the door barking he’s cute little head off. I walked in first and put Ashley’s bags in the kitchen for now then I went back out to help Ashley with the rest of her bags as soon as Ashley walked in jasper went berserk he was braking and jumping around everywhere it was just us our happy little family whole again. 

We spent the first day just watching movies it wasn’t much but it was enough it was just the three of us all cuddled up on the couch with our blankets and pillows. At about quarter to one we walked to the local fish and chip place down the street and had some lunch it was delicious you cant go wrong with some good old fish and chips on a hot summer day. After lunch we went to get some ice cream Ashley got her favourite cookies and cream in a cone with sprinkles of course, I got a plain chocolate cone and we had to get some for jasper so we got him a little cup of vanilla ice cream. By the time we got home it was already quarter to four. So we finished unpacking Ashley’s stuff into my room and got in our pjs and cuddled up on the floor and played some Mario cart on the switch. after a couple games we thought we should head to bed because it’s been a long day for all of us. I put jasper in his play pen then Ashley and I went to bed.

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SweetStorm
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SweetStorm wrote a review Review · 1h ago

This reminds me of a story that I was working on but scrapped. This whole thing is beautiful. You're doing great. Keep going! Stay gold! I would read this if it was an actual book. If you ever need some writing tips, I'm always here. My favorite character is probably Ashley even though I don't know her all that well yet. This is the most amazing thing you could have written tonight.

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Goose1233 commented Comment · 3h ago

This was an amusing peace of work. It is a great work if your LGBTQ+ and non even though it is 16+ it is good for all ages.though the book there was drama and fun.

Yesss eddyyyy

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kagehana13
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kagehana13 wrote a review Review · 3h ago

Okay I love where this is going so far! I love the way you write and how it feels very personal, I guess. Like it feels like the narrator is sitting right next to me telling me this story, it feels very intimate. I really liked the line "I miss her beautiful brown eyes that sparkle in the sun light, her adorable smile and her soft blonde hair that always looks amazing.", I liked how descriptive it was and right off the bat made me interested in these two characters.
One little critique I have is that don't forget to start a new paragraph each time a different person starts talking, it makes it easier for the reader to infer who is saying that line of dialogue. But I really like this story so far, I can't wait to read more of it!

AWWWWW THANK YOU SO MUCH (THIS ACTUALLY MADE ME CRY)❤️❤️❤️❤️



The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity.
— Amelia Earhart