Published October 14, 2010
Ice castle
I live here
In my castle of ice
frozen, sparkling,
ice.
I do not feel
the chill of ice
just the warmth
of being
somewhere I love.
The sun comes up.
Melting,
breaking,
losing all that's left.
I try to rebuild
my castle
of ice.
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Dude, I loved this! And it sounds like everyone else does too! Maybe add a period at the end of your last sentence, and job well done!
Oh my God. I absolutely love it. It's kind of sad at the end where you say you have to rebuild your castle but thats why I love it so much. But it's not really that sad because you say you love it so it can't be that sad.
OMG I love it! Great feeling to it also. try to use more big words!