Published November 5, 2012
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Hey..
What I learned from this poem is that love never vanishes even if two are very far from each other/ they lost each other
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Nice poem, but you spelled penetrate wrong !
Brittany here to review.
First off, in the first sentence you spelled "penetrate" wrong. I don't quite understand where the blue comes in but okay lol have a good night.
Happy Writing!
Very nice, symbolic. You spelled penetrate wrong, but other than that nice overall. I think your words and the lines could flow a little more smoothly. It should feel like a river or running water when you read it. Unless it's a different kind of poetry. But I did like it, keep writing.. I'm interested to dee what other things you may write.
That's pretty good, and nicely symbolic.
(Also, it's spelt 'penentrate.')