Published November 11, 2007
Why is your face always stuck in my mind
with my best friends hand tugging on your arm?
You sit in my eyes, and stare right back at me,
what happened to all the those dreams that we had?
Every song that I listen to pierces my brain,
with thoughts of you engulfing my eyes.
Get the friend out the way of our unanimous connection
And continue our journey, together alone.
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