Warning: This work has been rated 16+ for violence.
*This story is under my folder “Alice and the aliens”. Gacha Club character designs are under this forum: https://www.writerfeed.com/topic/117842-my-character-designs-lt-33-3?start=390. Enjoy!*
In the 1800s, there was a little baby girl named Molly, who was the second daughter of George and Amara Davidson. She had an older sister named Antoinette who was four years old, who always played some strange and yet exciting games with her.
Arielle liked to play games with her too. She was a girl her parents took in, a girl who was supposed to take care of Molly and Antoinette. Arielle gave Molly toys and fed her mashed-up food that was fun to throw around, but the best part about her was that she played hide-and-seek with her and Antoinette! She was doing it right now!
She told Molly they were going to play a game before putting her in her crib for the night. It was bedtime, but they were going to play a game. That was just how wonderful Arielle was! So, Molly waited, her fist in her mouth, staring up at the ribbons hanging above her. Arielle was going to come soon and play, so-
There was screaming in the room next to her. Tears welled in Molly’s eyes, because it sounded like Mommy and Daddy were screaming, when they shouldn’t have been. But she didn’t cry. She wasn’t sure what was happening. Arielle would tell her. Arielle knew a lot.
“Hi, Molly.”
It was Arielle. Molly knew what Arielle sounded like. Her footsteps were getting closer to the crib, until she picked Molly up and held her close. Her clothes usually smelled soft, just as how they felt. But they started to smell sour. Molly scrunched up her face. It was a strange smell. She didn’t like it. She opened up her mouth to cry, really cry-
Something sharp was plunging into her heart. Molly didn’t know what it was. She screamed.
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Molly woke up in a place that had no ceiling and no floor. It was all black. Daddy and Mommy were there, but they were all white with red pooling out of them. Blood? Antoinette hurt herself one time while playing and had Arielle take care of her bloody knee. Where was Antoinette and Arielle? They weren’t around.
Mommy hugged her. Daddy was walking around. He was trying to find something. Molly cried, loud and heavy, tears rolling down her face with blood that came out of her eyes, that stung a little. Arielle had hurt her. She had done something to hurt her and Molly didn’t see it. She had taken Antoinette away and Molly couldn’t find her. Molly couldn’t play with her.
It was the worst game of hide-and-seek ever. Antoinette was hurt and hiding too long. If she hid too long then Mommy and Daddy wouldn’t be able to help her. They wouldn’t be together.
Where could her big sister be?
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