A Haiku

by fire_of_dawn

Published February 19, 2010

In Poetry and Lyrics

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Yes, even I have been infected by the haiku bug. Here goes.

Give me a minute
And I'll change your life, just watch.
Two, and we'll see. Right?

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Stori
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Stori commented Comment · Feb 25, 2010

Two minutes, of course!

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Pacific_Sky14
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Pacific_Sky14 commented Comment · Feb 21, 2010

I agree with Durrie! :) Two what? I don't really know haiku's, but it's alright!!^>^

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Durriedog
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Durriedog commented Comment · Feb 19, 2010

Hey! I like it. The only nitpick -

'Two, and we'll see. Right?'

Two what?

Keep writing!

~Durr :smt023



What a piece of work is a man! How noble in reason, how infinite in faculty, in form and moving how express and admirable, in action how like an angel, in apprehension how like a god -- the beauty of the world, the paragon of animals!
— William Shakespeare